In my Happiness Paper I wrote about how close relationships with others affects your happiness. I included text from other authors, as well as person experiences to support my argument. Below are my three drafts in order from first draft to final draft.
First Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1932tT_jNBrYzIYAqMBA8zSd4JGUYZqODWCjVxQZvAf0/edit
Second Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14_4TcGYGMHI-hfl4lJoujjL_om3mNzDmJo0EjzQQdAw/edit
Final Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wosD-gfpIomlmRXlDY34yKNJxUPOerBiSw4-dboGOjc/edit
For the second essay of the semester I wrote about technology’s effect on students ability to focus, as well as their mental health.
First Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MZVIXAIdX1crKLiwxFKVoiD2q7Bxop3UIZxwF00NfOc/edit
Final Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XnO5YexKaHw8GLE3FZNeJk5FyORlqSoP_9HrI9ut8kM/edit
For the third essay of the semester we wrote our thoughts on whether we should be concerned for our country only, or all the countries of the world as a whole.
First Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bQHYzMm9CSfyLNOvxMUxHemLFPJQ4ozJUEtgloKglsM/edit
Second Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bQHYzMm9CSfyLNOvxMUxHemLFPJQ4ozJUEtgloKglsM/edit
Final Draft:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yjzRaQNIKLlzv6yMEMYF5TVvujqTZHGnG_5_cNg8jiI/edit
