For the second essay of the semester, we wrote about the affects of technology on our lives. Many people made arguments as to how technology decreases our happiness. My peer editing group happened to all write about the affects of technology on our mental health. We talked about how increase in social media use and other technology leads to depression and attention deficit disorders.
Here our examples of my peer editing work:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NbkFQZ3xX27uQBUZVgI25C0zLu1o5_f8MzvRFL0qJ6I/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s9sEYUdQf4n_sMEIqpLpBYYv0eMJZ9G-6o6MtoHkR3s/edit
For the third essay of the semester we wrote about whether we believe we should focus on the best interest of our country alone, or of all countries as a whole. For the first session of editing we focused on global changes of our peers essay.
Here are examples of my peer editing work:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zpPrmm2Jv2u8S4EmRyT7H7XP4rlrhcqf7n6Zh53Ml3M/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hinxv9Wia4fY0LxWPa6uuBtxxjMPlQpEZGfbNFeAyTA/edit
